ok, thx very much for all your feedback. i'm planning to used this background
for an ilustration in my novel, but since it still not good i'm going to ask my
friend to draw the ilustration and used this image as a basic idea what i want
it to be. i'll learn more to make a better background for my own satisfaction
^_^. one last think i want to ask is can photoshop add new default brush for
grass, leaves, etc? if can, where i can download it?
i reduce the texture on the torii, also repair the jagged on the tree. i also
add new color for the grass. for the leaves i want it to look like an autumn
leaves so the color must be brown right? maybe because of that it may looks
dull. to the stair that look flat i try to change that by adding shadow. i cant
change the stair since the layer already merge. unless i remade from scratch.
any idea how to make the backgroud don't look flat anymore?
about the stone tile i'm having a little trouble since it seems i already merge
it with another layer, i still try to find away to edit it. if i can't find a
way it seem i will remade the stone tile again.
i make a little background for my next wall, is it good enough or there
something to work on more? i haven't decide who (the chara) will be feature in
this wall. basicly i just bored and make this background to fill my free time. i
used photoshop to make this.
the original pic is from a snapshot from the anime, the original about 320 x 320
pixel, it is enlarge 4x. so i have to redraw and recolour the pic. but if u say
the pic quality is bad, i have no more to say.
can i have a more detail than this automated mesage? i work every wall over more
than 10 hour each, so i think i deserve a little explanation. if it is realy bad
than i don't mind it taken off the galery.
The wallpaper you have submitted entitled Under the moonlight was deleted for
one or more or the following reasons:
- It was too simplistic, with poor layout or background
- It was too blurry or overfiltered
- It used screenshots or unmodified stock photos
- It featured a poor quality extraction or had many artifacts on the images
- It was a low effort wallpaper
- It was an alternate version of an existing wallpaper. Please only upload one
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- It did not feature an anime-style image. See this announcement for more
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We only accept wallpapers where the members make a true effort to submit quality
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ok, thx very much for all your feedback. i'm planning to used this background for an ilustration in my novel, but since it still not good i'm going to ask my friend to draw the ilustration and used this image as a basic idea what i want it to be. i'll learn more to make a better background for my own satisfaction ^_^. one last think i want to ask is can photoshop add new default brush for grass, leaves, etc? if can, where i can download it?
once again thank you for your help ^_^
i reduce the texture on the torii, also repair the jagged on the tree. i also add new color for the grass. for the leaves i want it to look like an autumn leaves so the color must be brown right? maybe because of that it may looks dull. to the stair that look flat i try to change that by adding shadow. i cant change the stair since the layer already merge. unless i remade from scratch. any idea how to make the backgroud don't look flat anymore?
this the result for now:
Torii (Edited 3x)
this many repair make me realize how inexperience i am in making wall background LoL
Like this?
Torii (Edited 2x)
At first i'm giving to much texture that make it not right, so i reduce it litle by litle, and i think this is the right amount of texture.
oh, thx for the feedback until now ^_^
i edit a little as you suggested. this is the edit ver:
Torii (edited 1x)
about the stone tile i'm having a little trouble since it seems i already merge it with another layer, i still try to find away to edit it. if i can't find a way it seem i will remade the stone tile again.
i make a little background for my next wall, is it good enough or there something to work on more? i haven't decide who (the chara) will be feature in this wall. basicly i just bored and make this background to fill my free time. i used photoshop to make this.
Torii
and if eventualy i didn't used it is it acceptable to post it in general wallpaper?
feedback plz
Torii (Edited 1x)
the original pic is from a snapshot from the anime, the original about 320 x 320 pixel, it is enlarge 4x. so i have to redraw and recolour the pic. but if u say the pic quality is bad, i have no more to say.
can i have a more detail than this automated mesage? i work every wall over more than 10 hour each, so i think i deserve a little explanation. if it is realy bad than i don't mind it taken off the galery.
here is the pic that was deleted:
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3692/lenaleewallpaperbye21krej6.jpg
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4599/lenaleevector01wallgu1.jpg
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4360/lenaleewallpaper02fm9.jpg
bochii said:
e21krei,
The wallpaper you have submitted entitled Under the moonlight was deleted for one or more or the following reasons:
- It was too simplistic, with poor layout or background
- It was too blurry or overfiltered
- It used screenshots or unmodified stock photos
- It featured a poor quality extraction or had many artifacts on the images
- It was a low effort wallpaper
- It was an alternate version of an existing wallpaper. Please only upload one version of a wallpaper. If you wish to display alternate versions, you may post an offsite link.
- It did not feature an anime-style image. See this announcement for more information: http://forum.minitokyo.net/showthread/35992/
We only accept wallpapers where the members make a true effort to submit quality works for critiques and advice.
For more information, refer to the Policy and the FAQ
For help with making wallpapers, refer to the Art & Design Lounge and/or get your artwork critiqued in the Sandbox.
Sincerely,
Minitokyo Staff
This is an automated message and cannot be replied.
You can always post your art in the Sandbox.
Feedback can be directed at the moderator of the gallery your entry was in, which are bromithia, Chloe-chan, kuroimisa, littlejonny100, euna.